I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kumusta Renz. This is a fantastic poster. Very very clear and good for the reader! Consider either saying " How to make a good comment" or "How to make good comments". Read these and see how they sound to you. Ka pai!
1.Hello Renz. 2.I like the set up of your poster.It is easy to read and not over crowded. 3.I like the picture you have used of the puppy,it's SO cute. 4.Maybe next time you could use capital letters as I notice there are some missing. 5.Did you enjoy making this poster? 6.I stopped at number 6 as I am an adult and don't need someone to check my work, although I do need to re-read it to make sure it makes sense.
Well done Renz.I followed your poster.How well do you think I did?I look forward to hearing from you.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Kumusta Renz. This is a fantastic poster. Very very clear and good for the reader! Consider either saying " How to make a good comment" or "How to make good comments". Read these and see how they sound to you. Ka pai!
ReplyDeleteHi Miss Clifford and thanks for the feedback. I acdindently forgot to put the a on. Again thanks for feedback.
Delete1.Hello Renz.
ReplyDelete2.I like the set up of your poster.It is easy to read and not over crowded.
3.I like the picture you have used of the puppy,it's SO cute.
4.Maybe next time you could use capital letters as I notice there are some missing.
5.Did you enjoy making this poster?
6.I stopped at number 6 as I am an adult and don't need someone to check my work, although I do need to re-read it to make sure it makes sense.
Well done Renz.I followed your poster.How well do you think I did?I look forward to hearing from you.