Friday, 5 July 2019
My book
In Room eight we have been creating books using book creator. In the story we needed to use narratives that set the scene. We also had to make a problem and a solution. Here is my book that I made. Click to read my book
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I really enjoyed your story Renz. You created an interesting story and I could imagine watching the action. You had a very original story with several settings and problems. Very well done. Just remember not to move between first and third person. You sometimes called one character I, and sometimes Renz. This means stick to talking about Renz...such as 'Renz said "oh no Master", instead of 'I said'.
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