In writing time we were doing writing about marshmallow. We have to put all the action in the video don't read the word underneath because there some spoilers. if you finished the video you can read I hope you like it . :)
Wednesday, 23 October 2019
Marshmallows Descriptive Writing
In writing time we were doing writing about marshmallow. We have to put all the action in the video don't read the word underneath because there some spoilers. if you finished the video you can read I hope you like it . :)
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Great use of vivid verbs and adjectives. Very well done renz.
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