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Friday, 27 March 2020

lost and found writing verstion

Hi viewers,

Today I am going to post my lost and found. I took all the words and I put more verbs and highlighted it. Here's the

The fox and dinosaur, they each have a good connection and they like and care for each other. 

It was midnight and it was so dark and black outside. The dinosaur was in his home just staying. The fox was in the fountain throwing rocks on the fountain because she was bored and alone.

 The fox was standing in the fountain.
 The dinosaur was calling her when she talked to him. He feels loved by the fox  .The bamboo stick dropped in the blue water because it was too heavy. The fox was feeling so scared and petrified. The dinosaur was worried for her and didn't know what to do.

All hope was lost. All the dinosaur body parts were almost gone and the fox was running out of air and couldn't breathe. 


The dinosaur head was left when he jumped he was gone all was a piece of string landed on the well and it started sinking in. The fox grabbed the string and went to the top of the well. She picked all of the cotton and the green string . The next day she knitted the dinosaur. She was so tired that she almost fell asleep and the string was untangled so she had to start all over again.






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