Onomatopoeia Writing

Kumusta readers, 

Today I am posting my onomatopoeia writing. Onomatopoeia means about sounds. Sounds like bang, boom and woof. But the writing about a race and we need hear what's happening and write a story about. Here's is my awesome work that I have done.

 “ Bang Boom”

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Today is the day of the final race in the tournament. He expects to be in the top 3. Last night he slept like a baby. Because he was super excited. His mom went to the bedroom and woke him up loudly. She was louder than a rocket ship being launched.

“ FINN WAAKE UPP” 

He fell off the bed and  mom laughed like a monkey.  

“ Ha ha ha ha ha “

Fin went past her and ate breakfast and took a shower he was singing at the top of his lungs. His other siblings woke up because he was singing. Fin went to the car and went to the stadium. When he  got there he saw the other kids who were competing in the race and they were tall. He saw the tallest kid, he could stack 3 of himself and  he would be the same height as him. The race was about to start in 10 mins .Fin was warming up in the locker room because nobody was there and he was too scared to warm up with the contestants. When they were lining up to start the race, Fin’s stomach suddenly started to rumble like a drum. 

He wanted to go to the bathroom but it was too late, the inside of his stomach felt like a bomb about to explode. 

 “ Bang Boom”

The other kids were concerned about it. The guy pulled the trigger of the starting gun.  

“ Bang “ 

Fin started jogging but the other kids were running. He was last and the commentator was talking about him. 

“ Oh no someone is in last place “ 

The commentator said it too loud and everybody heard it. Some were even laughing. But Fin ignored it and his coach was motiving him. 

“ Don’t look at them and don’t listen to them Fin  “ 

He runs like lightning and catches up to them but the kid in first place was too far in front. But he needs to run around the course again. Fin runs like lightning again. He catches up with the kid and he runs faster, faster, faster, faster. But he never stopped. Fin’s legs are starting to hurt and he is breathing heavily.

“ Hhha Hhho HHHaa HHho 

But Fin’s couch motivated him again. 

“ Try your best Fin and keep running like lighting” 

Fin ran faster than he could and went past the kid in first place. Fin crossed the finish line, the commentator shouted

“ Oh Fin finished first in the race”

The End 

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