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Monday, 16 September 2019

All the things I would do in my free time



2 comments:

  1. Hi Renz,
    I really like the way you tell what you do on your free time. I also like the balance of what you are doing like half playing and half studying. Next time, maybe add how much time you do this things. Other than that, great post!

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  2. Hi Renz,
    The way you tell what you do when you're at your free time is really good. You also do some schoolwork and some drawing which is also good. Maybe add some more things that you do with your family next time.

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