I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Renz, I like the way you explain the story to the viewers. As I read your explanation, I began to see what the story looks like and what is it on about. The way you explain the characters are really thoughtful and it helps us to understand the characters. Maybe next time, explain what happened at the end of the story so we know what happened.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Renz,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you explain the story to the viewers. As I read your explanation, I began to see what the story looks like and what is it on about. The way you explain the characters are really thoughtful and it helps us to understand the characters. Maybe next time, explain what happened at the end of the story so we know what happened.
Hello Renz My name is Jade I really like the way you did your book review maybe next time you could do some photos.
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