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Friday, 20 December 2019

SLJ week 1 day 2 act 2


Hi, I am writing my moon poem, my brother help because we can't find a lot of rhyming words. I hope you like my poem


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  1. Mikey SLJ7 January 2020 at 10:05

    Mōrena Renz,

    Congratulations on completing another activity! Remember, the more activities you complete, the more points you earn! You can also earn extra points by commenting on other bloggers' Summer Learning Journey posts. For every quality comment you leave, you'll receive two points! :)

    I really like the way you've presented this activity, Renz. The drawing of the moon with the New Zealand flag in it really makes it stand out on your blog. Being on the moon would be an amazing feeling, wouldn't it? If you were given the opportunity, do you think you'd like to travel there?

    Keep up the great blogging! I can't wait to read more posts from you soon. :)

    Mā te wā,

    Mikey

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