Today I am posting my made up story. It's about a boy who lost he parents, can he find them ? here's the awesome work I have done
Once upon a time there was a family who lived on a mountain. They were really poor . There were 5 people in the family. Steve was the dad he taught his kids how to survive in the wild. Mary was the mom she always did the housework. Steen was the oldest brother, he always kept an eye on his little brother and sister. Sherry the sister she sometimes helped mom. Simon the little brother he doesn't do anything. When the family was going to the village to buy something they left Steen so he could protect the house from the animals. But they didn't come back. He stayed up all night but they still didn’t come back. Steen went to the village to check what happened to them but the village was empty. He was about to head home until he saw a green blob in the ground. He touched it with a stick and he looked at his back he saw a lot of goblins. He ran the fastest he could and the goblins were chasing him. He went to the tower and suddenly a wizard just popped out of nowhere and he killed all the goblins. He went up to the boy and he said “What’s your name? and the boy said Steen. The wizard can teach magic, Steen jumps with joy,l he wizard grabs his staff and a magic book. The wizard said, ``Abrahadabra Steen. Steen grabbed the staff and said Abrahadabra a beam of light went to a tree and the tree was gone. He kept doing it in 3 days. The wizard woke up and went outside. Steen destroyed all the trees from the forest. The wizard grows the trees again. The wizard said you're ready. Steen grabbed the staff and went to the village again. He saw an army of goblins and he said the magic word. All the goblins were killed; he saved all people from the village including his parents. The mayor gave him a lot of money and the family was moved to a different house. Steen’s parents are happy now.
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Wow Renz! I really enjoyed reading your story! I love how you asked a question of your readers on your blog too. You have created a strong narrative by following the narrative story structure where you describe your main character, the problems that happen to his family and how he solves them. I'm impressed. i look forward to seeing what you will create on Thursday and Friday!
ReplyDeleteNext step: All your writing has shot off to the side. You will need to reformat it so that other's can read your fabulous story.