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Today I will be posting my language feature writing. This week our language feature is metaphors. Metaphors are like a simile but without using as or like. Here is a metaphor list and my work.
I was in the Amazon Rainforest to uncover the truth of the hidden treasure.
The rain forest was super dangerous; it was like standing on a volcano.
I managed to set a tent on the soft muddy dirt. The rain was raining cats and dogs.
It almost made a hole in my tent. I slept like a baby that needed milk
14 hours later
The ground was slippery like ice. I was walking so much that my legs were getting chopped.
I accidentally stepped onto a twig and a vine grabbed my leg and made me upside down.
I tried to untie the vine but it was tied like 1 million times.
I was upside down for 1 hour and all my blood was on my head finally the vine let go.
But I fainted like I was dead.
I woke to see a tent around me. Suddenly the wind was a howling wolf. It got colder. I
“ Whooshh”
I went to the tent to see a person standing on the tent. My eyes were ice as he stared at her.
“ Oh you were awake” ???
“ Why are you here” I said
“ To uncover the truth about the hidden treasure” ??? said
“ That’s I’m going to do too” I answered
“ Oh then let's work together” ??? said
To be continued maybe....
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