I sit so long that my legs is crumbling
I’m so angry that I felt like a volcano erupting.
I’m so excited that I might self destruct
I raced to meet my friends. I was so excited that I might self-destruct. My friend Jon said,” you're faster than a rocket ship “ I finally made it to school. I ran to my class like a cheetah. I opened the door and sat on my chair. The reading section was an eternity; Finally it was home time. I ran to my house like a flash. I opened the door and saw my parents killed and something written on the wall. I walked up to it and my body froze like ice. It written
“ You’re next, do not tell anybody”
I called my friends and told them what happened. When my friends were at my house like a second. They were so shocked they passed out.
3 years later.
It was 3 year later when the Incident happened. It was like a nightmare. When people saw the incident. They freak out like a pig not trying to be bacon. Then I became a detective. I will shatter the person who killed my parents 1000 times. I am going to solve that mystery.
To be continued maybe...
Kumusta Renz,
ReplyDeleteI like your examples of hyperbole.
Remember that here's means 'here is' and doesn't need an extra 'is'.
It's an interesting story and I do hope you finish it!