A Very Dark Secret ( Story)

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Today I will be posting my blog post. Unfortunately this is the last writing blog post. This blog is about checking our writing for deleting repeated words, using paragraphs and putting punctuation. Last week we didn't finished our story and we make it better. Here's my awesome work that I have done. 

“ZZZZZZZZZZ” Keni was charging his energy beam . I could feel my hopeless body about to end. He was almost finished charging his energy beam. I tried to move my body but it was a frozen block of ice. 

Hours earlier I think this can’t get any worse. I was chilling at my home and I was watching the news. The news was talking about a villain. They had destroyed the mayor’s house and the mayor now wants to capture the villain. 

Keni was my brother. I knew him when I was born, but he went missing soon after. Little did I know that Keni was on top on my roof. He was staring at me so long that his eyes might explode. 

Suddenly a beam of light was going into my apartment. The beam of light hit my wall next to the window. “BOOOOOOOM” I saw a person fly up into the air. “I think that’s my brother! Where did he come from?” I wondered 

When I stared at my brother I didn’t realise that I was flying up in the air. Until I felt my feet were weightless. I was flapping my arms like a bird but it didn’t help. I landed in an alleyway. The impact was an equivalent of a TNT on my body. 

Keni was searching for me and he found me. He dropped down from the air and landed with a cool pose. I tried to crawl away from him. But Keni punched me. I did the same to him but he kept dodging it like he was moving at the speed of light. The fight was like a cat and a dog having a fight. 

My arms were getting tired like it was falling apart. My hopeless body felt an earthquake just hit it. Keni was charging his energy beam.

“ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ” 

I could feel my hopeless body about to end . He was half way to kill me. I tried to move my body but it was a frozen block of ice. 

“Did you know i’m your lost older brother? Our mother died because you were born now you shall pay the ultimate price” 

Keni was about to hit me with his energy beam but I stopped it. By covering his hand luckily the shockwave didn’t activate. 

“What just happened with my powers,” he yelled 

“You just don’t get it. I was born with powers that’s why we’re brothers” I answered with a proud voice

I teleported behind him and pushed him against the wall. I punched him like a machine gun. The wall was getting destroyed like a jackhammer was hitting it. When he slowly fell to the ground I quickly hit him with my dark beam. Keni was passed out, he had been defeated.

Suddenly the mayor came up to me and said proudly, 

“You young man you will be the defender of this city”.

1 week ago 

It’s been a week ago and I was having a holiday on a tropical island that was not discovered. I hear the news that Keni went to a prison that no one can get out of there. I decide that I will keep powers a secret. But what if Keni somehow broke out of prison and told anybody that I have powers. Luckily the mayor didn't see me. If Keni tells everybody I will stop but it’s another story for another time. 

 

The End

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