Kumusta, welcome back to my blog,
This week we been writing stories with language features. Now we learn a lot of language features. We make a sport writing because last week it was our last winter sport. But I will tell about because it's almost going to end. If you don't about language features here's a recap and a example.
- Onomatopoeia - ‘Bang’
- Metaphor - “You are the sun!’
- Personification “The clouds danced across the sky.”
- Hyperboles - “I was so embarrassed I would have stuck my head in the toilet to hide.”
- Alliteration - “It was time for super Sunday sports.”
- Dialogue - “Don’t move,” Ellenessa whispered.
Onomatopoeia - ‘Bang’
Metaphor - “You are the sun!’
Personification “The clouds danced across the sky.”
Hyperboles - “I was so embarrassed I would have stuck my head in the toilet to hide.”
Alliteration - “It was time for super Sunday sports.”
Dialogue - “Don’t move,” Ellenessa whispered.
What
Wait for our team. “ Hi Khiel let's warm up and practice are shooting” He insisted
Warming up
Walking up to the gym
Putting gear “ Hey can you help tie my shoes” he cried
Practice shots
Coach talking about game the plan “ Ok you five will start and you three will be subbing for later”
Game starting
Subbing “ who our you guarding”
Tripping I was so embarrassed that I want to disappear
Stomping ball bouncing the ball goes through the net “ Thud thud bang bang whoosh”
Coach telling what to do “ Our defense is weak. Make sure you defense your enemy”
Half time
Game finished “ I so tired that I can sleep for 1 year
What
Wait for our team. “ Hi Khiel let's warm up and practice are shooting” He insisted
Warming up
Walking up to the gym
Putting gear “ Hey can you help tie my shoes” he cried
Practice shots
Coach talking about game the plan “ Ok you five will start and you three will be subbing for later”
Game starting
Subbing “ who our you guarding”
Tripping I was so embarrassed that I want to disappear
Stomping ball bouncing the ball goes through the net “ Thud thud bang bang whoosh”
Coach telling what to do “ Our defense is weak. Make sure you defense your enemy”
Half time
Game finished “ I so tired that I can sleep for 1 year
Tomorrow it’s going to be fun Friday night’s super sports. I will talk about it and I
will be using language features. You will be wondering what sport I will be talking about. Well it’s basketball and we played at winter time in term 3. But there’s only three games before term 3 is over. Now I will be talking about how our game works. When we arrived at Middleton school we waited outside for other players on our team.
When I was first in Middleton I looked at the team and my mind said that they were tough. I was so scared that my heart almost got out of my chest.
KIA ORA RENZ,
ReplyDeleteI like how you wrote about you playing hockey with your team for winter sports.
I also like that you have added a photo of you playing hockey.
I have a question how do you stop the hockey ball if you need to turn around.