Kumusta readers welcome back to blog,
Today I will be showing my own song choruses. This song choruses is just about up's and down's and you change that. Why do you do this ? I did this because a Summer learning journey activity. It's so fun to make my own song choruses and sorry for the summer learning journey team for not making this song a repeated one. Here my work
It’s not fair , you gotta lie like that, I trusted you of all of my might and you betrayed me, now my face turned white.
It’s time move on and fight all my ways where the time is right, Now is time show that I’m bright and I we be delight
Thank you for checking out my blog and make sure you comment down below. Thank you and have a safe holiday.
Kia Ora Renz, my name is Kiana and I am a blog commenter for the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteKa pai! Awesome! Thank you for sharing your own personal song chorus, i am glad that you had fun doing this activity. My favorite part of this chorus is when you said “Now is the time to show that i am bright and i will be delight” it has such a powerful message behind it and i think that people too often forget to show their brightness whatever that may look like.
I would like to leave you with one piece of advice, i found it a bit challenging to read your chorus in purple infront of the black and white background, maybe you can edit to make sure everyone is able to read it clearly. That might look like making the font size bigger or re positioning the words. How do you feel about that?
Keep up the good work. I look forward to hearing back from you in the comment section below and seeing more posts on your blog.
Ngā mihi
Kiana-Marino
Hello Renz.
ReplyDeleteYou have been very busy during these holidays.It's great to see you putting in a big effort to get these activities completed.
Well done for making up your own song.This couldn't of been easy.
I would struggle with this.Good on you for giving it a HUGE go.