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Today I will be posting my descriptive writing. The Descriptive writing is a writing slide of photos to write on the present tense. We also do senses, the sense has a language features on like. Seeing, hearing feeling touching smelling. We to put as many language features and senses. Then we put on paragraphs. Here my awesome work that I have done.
Write a description of a moment in time imagining you are at a family birthday with trying to get organised for a big photograph.
Try to use as many language features as possible to include all the senses.
Try to keep your writing to three paragraphs.
Write in present tense.
Hearing - onomatopoeia, dialogue
Seeing - metaphor, personification
Smelling - hyperbole, strong verbs and adjectives, simile
Feeling - hyperbole, metaphor, alliteration
Touch - simile, strong verbs and adjectives
My Thursday Writing
The Crazy Patry
“ HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOUUU” A horde of people singing
My friends and family were as loud as a singing whale. The horde of people crowded to the back to take a photo. We were cramped like trees close to each other and touching there each other's branches. I could smell the strong amroa of food it was getting attention from people. The birthday was colorful like a rainbow. The balloons fit it with colour and their camouflage as a chameleon.
The friends and family were eating the food and the cake like rabbits eating a carrot.
“ MUNCH CRUNCH MUNCH CRUNCH”
We were so full after eating the food. The cake tasted a mouth full of sugar.We were feeling our stomach was big as a elephant. I was thinking I was about fall like turtle on its back. When we walk we were slow as a snail. But DJ was blasting the music it was like a concert.
We were jumping up and down like a kangaroo. were about to make a earthquake by jumping. After we jump for 5 minutes. Are feet felt like it been chopped off. We leave the party and clean everything up like a butler.
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