Yesterday we wrote a story but we used show not tell. We highlighted our action words and replaced our weak action words to strong ones. We got the strong action words from this website thesaurus. Here's the awesome work I have done.
This week will are trying to use show not tell. Here's the example of what's show not tell.
Jake ate the coconut. : Weak action word
Jake swallowed the whole entire coconut with the skin. : Strong action word
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