Today I am posting my story. This story is about a person who survive a flood that wipe out the planet. first who have to answer question about the main character and write the story. The most hardest part is writing because it takes a long time. We were learning how to write a strong narrative and it had be believable and descriptive.
Here's the story.
26/5/2020
Question time!
supply around the rig How did Sean survive the great flood? Because he was prepared. He tried to tell the people there was a flood but they just ignored him.
Can you make a list of all of the things Sean needs to survive?
How will he obtain them all?
A net under the fish tank,. (Food)
A pipe goes to the top of the fish tank every so he goes up he presses a button to open the pipe. (Air)
A powerful fan goes up or left or right.
What are the biggest dilemmas that Sean faces? . How will he overcome them?
Is he alone? Unknown
Jake was the only person who had taken notice of the warning. A great flood had swept over the planet, and now life was very different.... Jake was really different to other people. He was kind and happy. Every time he makes a mistake he apologizes even if it is not his fault but other people weren't like him.
He told everybody there was a flood but they just ignored him. Then he stops telling people to prepare, he just prepares himself . He got a giant fish tank with unbreakable glass and he custome the fishtank in three days. He put a pipe with a grind so salt and debris can’t go to the water he just pressed the button to get water. Now he has a water supply. He went to the store and got a 6 powerful fan and a net. He attached it in he’s fish -tank. He was finally ready. The alarm went off. He went to the nearest hill and drove to the hill he went inside the fish tank. . Then the water went to him and the water sank him into the sea. He bangs his head into the glass then faints.
36 hours later Jake woke and he tapped his head and it was okay. He looked around and he couldn't believe his eyes. The fish was around him and the water was blue. When it’s night time the fish tank was green. He kept hitting other seaweeds it cause the fish tank to lose balance and he bang his head to the glass for the second time. Then he fell asleep, when he woke up he said to himself.
“I should put pillows around fish tank”
300 Day Later
Jake was really sick of eating raw fish and kept hitting his head on the glass . He searched the ocean of days and nights until he saw an oil rig. He went there and saw a red button. He pressed it. Suddenly a computer turns on and it says going up for 100 days and there’s
100 days later
Jake was asleep until he heard a rocket being blasted until he stood up. The windows were covered with iron and there’s holes so oxygen can go inside. The rocket stops blasting and stops. Suddenly the door opened and he went out of the rig. Then he saw a bit of people he said to them.
“ Where am I “ Jake said
“ Your in the International Space Station and your the only one who survive the flood”
Jake was proud of himself and he can start a new life here. He wishes the people that they are still alive in the ocean.
The end
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